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Friday, 6 February 2009

My poem

Snow in England

Children are happy!
Enjoying together!
Playing together!
Jumping together!
Making snowman!
Smiling together!
Singing together!
Taking pictures together!

Celso Oliveira
England, 05/02/09

2 comments:

  1. Celso!

    Children not childrens.(child, plural children)
    Making snowmen(plural)once there is more than once child.Snowman is not so bad, but when children play together, is more like they make more than one snowman.

    Kind Regards

    Ze da Labia

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